Tamsin put five fullstops and one exclamation mark. I like the way that Tamsin used the -ed for liked. Tamsin, you know alot of words. You wrote alot of cool words. Next time you can write more exciting words. From Olivia
I like how you wrote your story, Tamsin. I think you wrote lots of words. I like how you wrote 'Disney on Ice'. You can write more exciting words. I think you did lots of fullstops and capital letters. From Lucy.
Tamsin, I loved hearing your story. It was beautiful. You could write about what you got to see. You wrote some words you already know. Tamsin, i liked it when you wrote about Disney on Ice. Tamsin, you used lots of fullstops when you needed to. Well done. From Ava
Tamsin put five fullstops and one exclamation mark. I like the way that Tamsin used the -ed for liked. Tamsin, you know alot of words. You wrote alot of cool words. Next time you can write more exciting words.
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I like how you wrote your story, Tamsin. I think you wrote lots of words. I like how you wrote 'Disney on Ice'.
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I think you did lots of fullstops and capital letters.
From Lucy.
Tamsin, I loved hearing your story. It was beautiful. You could write about what you got to see. You wrote some words you already know. Tamsin, i liked it when you wrote about Disney on Ice. Tamsin, you used lots of fullstops when you needed to. Well done.
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Tamsin,I like how you use your letter sounds for words you can't spell. Next time you could write about what you saw there. Mrs T
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